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allan
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since 2000-04-09
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On the road

0 posted 2000-07-26 03:48 PM


we ran through the darkening forest
imagining misty elves followed us

in that summer all was possible
a paradise of innocence filled our lives

we laughed, sang and swam mirrored lakes
cool pure misty blue in honeyed sunlight

feeling the earth between our toes
we imagined ourselves true elves

friends of tree and stalk,
fools to the stars,
fate & ferret reborn

only so high
as the golden corn

© Copyright 2000 Allan Tierney - All Rights Reserved
Munda
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since 1999-10-08
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The Hague, The Netherlands
1 posted 2000-07-26 03:55 PM


Ah, as a Tolkien fan, I truly love this !
kelieth
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Normal IL - USA
2 posted 2000-07-27 01:37 AM


The mystical creatures described so well my hat's off to this one written well.  



Kevin

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lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
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saarbruecken, Germany
3 posted 2000-07-27 12:54 PM


allan,

how lovely!
I wish I had been there!


Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo



allan
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since 2000-04-09
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On the road
4 posted 2000-07-27 01:21 PM


me too!  
Dennis L. White
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Michigan, U.S.A.
5 posted 2000-07-27 02:40 PM


Allan,
  This is my childhood revisited! WOW! ,the adventures we had, Thanks for the vision!
Dennis :^)


Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

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6 posted 2000-07-29 11:59 AM


Allan~
What a lovely place to be !
Glad you took me there.
~*Marge*~


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midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
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Singapore
7 posted 2000-07-30 08:05 AM


This juz seems so surreal and... fluffy! hehehe i imagine all dreams to be fluffy, allan *S*


love, michelle


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