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Maya the Brokenhearted Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 66 |
NO!!!!!!!!!! [This message has been edited by Maya the Brokenhearted (edited 02-20-2000).] |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Maya, you could have written this from listening to my heart beat. This poem speaks so well what I am feeling right now. You clarity of emotion never ceases to amaze me. Wonderful - heartwrenching work. Michael |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
As is the custom on a first post, you will receive an email welcoming you to Passions. Your poem is hauntingly sad...so beautiful it hurts... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Maya, add my welcome to the list...you will love it here, everyone is SO great and encouraging. this poem is amazing and so beautifully expressed, full of both vivid imagery and emotion. take care, janet marie In the time we've known That we each are a part of one another We've lost as much as we have won... And as our lives have grown We have found that it only brings us pain To hang on to the things that we have done... ***Still I love the times you've come*** Jackson Browne |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
I don't agree with any of the replies here. Why? Well, because they all say this poem is great... It isn't great. It's INCREDIBLE!!!! This is beautiful, Maya! You've got to tell me how you do it some time!  Welcome to Passions!  -from the one and only, (purple and short,) Little Spyro T. Dragon [This message has been edited by Little_Spyro (edited 02-14-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, beautiful poetry! Yes, life goes on after heartbreak, new memories will be made to associate with those things that presently bring sad ones only. Time does heal. Welcome to Passions, Maya! I look forward to reading more from you! Denise |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Maya, I agree with all the above. This is hauntingly sad and beautifully written. Welcome to Passions. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Maya... I love yer stuff!!! |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Maya, It's a pleasure to welcome you to the forums. Excellent poem--what a way to enter the Pub! I'm looking forward to more from you.~Gene |
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Maya the Brokenhearted Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 66 |
Thank you so much for your wonderful replies and welcomes. This is my dark side....hope you'll bear with me!  Maya |
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