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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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ALLEY LOST ? Melancholy madness mine silent songs scream from home. An alley filled with other cats love memories, on the phone. Once so many avenues open detoured into price, then cost. Happy, happy for your happiness sweet sorrow for our loss. So many roads we explored then fear chased us away. Uncertain to the final fault perhaps, once upon another day? There is no balm to heal, renew no poultice of greens or moss. Our path seems closed forever tell me love, am I an alley lost? bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
bleeding..i can feel the sadness in this one..the aching need for an answer... good writing..parting with someone you love is desperately full of questions... dg "i speak in written word--my lips, no sound may utter..." dgvarner |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
"Melancholy madness mine silent songs scream from home." I love these linese especially Dan.. the picture is tormenting.. slow.. drawn out.. I am glad this was a road u drossed safely.. ^^ Loved this one.. Luv, < !signature--> Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu [This message has been edited by Yu Lan (edited 07-19-2000).] |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Yo, big guy.. nice poem, man, an alley lost? hehe, probably an alley gain? hehe.. - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Ur poems never seem to cease delighting me! cosh I've found another astounding piece, of coz! kudos, bleeding! *S* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
What an excellent poem..I agree that it is an alley found... You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
thank y'all for the response... sorry haven't posted more timely, my beloved has been in hospital since Monday. Kinda loosing track of time and space for abit... bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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