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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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along the same lines as "tainted"...however, seperate fragments of the same mindset... ---------------------------- we have no past-- i'll not bring it up... fear has been summoned and stands guard over these wounds-- lest you should twist your blade in them again. only love could know this pain... but i'll not be vulnerable to you-- i'll keep my soul wrapped up in this shell for i know now, we have no past-- i mourn the death of it... --dgvarner 7-9-00 for abc.. ---------------------------------- "only a friend can betray a friend a stranger has nothing to gain and only a friend comes close enough to ever cause so much pain" --michael card "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
dgvarner, this reads so intense---can really feel the tremendous pain and anguish behind it  like the last line(i mourn the death of the past)...haunting line to leave this reader with i use the prayer of serenity to help me get through tough times and i hope it will be of use to you  May God grant me the serenity to accept the things i cannot change, the courage to change things i can and the wisdom to accept the difference |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
kaile..thanks--i tend to forget that serenity prayer when i could use it most.. i'll keep it in my mind this time..dg |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Wooo...tremendously serious...such is friendship...u portrayed it really really well! Here's my vote!! *S* If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
How very true...reminds me of a line from a song by Sarah McCloughlin "So afraid to love you, more afraid to lose, clinging to past that doesn't let me choose". I can certainly relate to that feeling. Your poem is wonderful! You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
midnight: yes..it was a wonderful friendship..i like to think of it in terms of "will be again..." i hope--time will tell.. thank you for your "vote" ladylost: wow..that sarah song really hit a nerve..so true to the situation..i'll have to see if i have that one so i can listen.. thank you for thinking this a wonderful poem.. dg |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good, dgvarner! Very well done! Denise |
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