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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore 
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- I stumbled upon netpoets by chance...and little did I realise that the past 18 years of my life have been a meaningless lie without poetry...This is to fellow poets! May our poetry come to life with the beauty of language! love, from a chinese gal -------------------------------------------------- Yet again your hurting remarks Sent spirals of pain deep down my heart And yet again your accusations Hurt my soul like splinters of glass I can't seem to recall Since when the fights began Tattered and torn my spirit may be But the time has come Deny not this Don't want to live another day of regret This doesn't seem like the situation we set out to achieve Go ahead and don't turn back, please Let go |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Short and sweet and so many meanings.  Great job.Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Belated welcome to Passions, an excellent poem. Much enjoyed. "All my life what I mistook for friendly pats on the back Were really the hands that pushed me further and further down The more I struggle, the less |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Thanks keliath and brian..*S* I look forward to your posts! Go Go!! If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
well, i admire the speaker for knowing when to make a clean break and not cling on to a seemingly wretched relationship anymore...if only all men were like this guy!!!this world probably wont be so complex  |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Yup kaile *S* Making a clean break is not easy, but it at least spares our own feelings...This is also my personal philosophy... Thanks! If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
This is powerful writing, shooting straight from the hip! What raw honesty! Nice piece! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Wow Dennis, thanks a load! I guess most of my poems are pretty straightforward...I like myself to speak this way too! *S* If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Wow Dennis, thanks a load! I guess most of my poems are pretty straightforward...I'll like myself to communicate this way too! *S* If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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