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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore 
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Starry studded black velvet A dream untold This dream unfolds I wish upon the brightest star That a passer-by Will warm my heart With words of love And a comforting hug It needn't be forever This dream of mine For as long as this dark night lasts I'll be satisfied Streaks of lightning flashes by Into my dreams I'll bring my hope tonight If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
 Great poem. I wish I could do the same.' It needn't be forever This dream of mine For as long as this dark night lasts I'll be satisfied ' Liked this stanza to describe your desire to sleep through the night. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Nice description, I liked the first stanza esspecily! It has a lovely hopefulness about it. |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Beautifully undulating rythm and motion of word. Descriptive beauty with each line. TAP2 (new here, can't wait to read more) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
no wonder you are called midnight blues...are all your poems based on dreams?LOL like the last line muchly...shows the sparkling embers of hope and faith radiating from your poem another one i enjoyed...keep posting |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Gentle and serene, like a lullaby. I enjoyed this and the way it flows. Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. ellie LeJeune |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MidnightBlues~ 'Starry studded black velvet A dream untold This dream unfolds' I like this - ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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chibi_dragon Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 58 |
A very well done piece of work about love midnightblues. True to the core  . Love it!!  --Chibi |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Thanks buddies! Glad u all liked it *S* You were all sooooo SWEET! love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
To dream is to live To live a dream is to live forever Dreamers of the world UNITE Jon |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Michelle, this poem is so warm! I love it...without dreams what would we have? We would live in a cold, cold world. This really is a great piece!....Beth You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Juz say.....i'm a hopeless romantic....dreams are the most magical gifts tat God ever gave to me! love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Such a delightful peace, I hope you find the hug you seek. Great job. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Michelle- This is beautiful. Really enjoyed it. "A dream untold This dream unfolds" I LOVE THIS! -vicky "I have read your words, and within them I have found your heart. -vlraynes |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
The chill night deepens As her fleeting dream unfolds For in the flashing darkness She found someone to hold WOW...love this one...very thought provoking...great read.. "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~ |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Kevin - i'm still waiting *S* thanks vicky! Thanks a load! u're a brick! *huGz* majestic - hello it feels good to knoe that my words inspired ur creative juices....that was lovely! love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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