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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore 
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if i'm just a passerby from the outside looking in at this love story if someone can tell me why love bears so much hurt and pain i might just walk by if you never felt for me in any special loving way if you cared to tell me you can't say you've walked into my love story all these tragedies are not meant for me If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Midnightblues! This has a very sad tone to it. I'm sure most people will be able to relate to this at one time or another in their lives. Please check your email for a special welcome!  Denise |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Greetings, fellow poet friend...may your stay here be long and fulfilling... i have always admird people who can write short and sweet poems and this is one of those poems which conveys a lot within a few simple lines keep up the good work |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Welcome indeed. I agree a simple short touching piece. I long to read more from you. Great JobKevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Midnightblues, Welcome to the Corner Pub, pull up a chair and DO tell us more,( WAITER, a drink for MidnightB) you'll find yourself amoung friends here who all have loves battle scars to share. Looking forward to more of your post! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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dr tung Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 55singapore |
short a sweet poem...makes my heart ache for the person in the poem...like ur style |
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chibi_dragon Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 58 |
I do kinda know how love feels. I can definitely relate to your poem, midnightblues. Great poem!!   |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Love can be extremely good to you when you treat it right. Good job though! --the little one |
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EroseGrover Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 44SD,CA 92126 |
Welcome to passions! I'm shure you will enjoy yourself as much as I am! Wonderful first poem my dear keep it up! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
hey midnight! hope you enjoy the pub..i've been mostly gone for a while..but i come back now and then.... its a great place  great poem..will look for more of your work first chance i get! dg "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner |
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EroseGrover Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 44SD,CA 92126 |
Midniight what a wonderful poem I ejoyed alot..now I guess Im jelous!=)=) |
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