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a_little_girl
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since 2000-05-08
Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA

0 posted 2000-07-02 02:09 PM


Love Rules!!
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That night seemed so far away,
That love ever so gay
We had danced the night
And fought the great fight
Which makes me wonder
Did I dream when I met you?

This great love feels so real
I like the way it appeals
To the senses.
Yet I still feel
That this is a fairy tale come true
And did I dream when I met you?

The angelic feel of your lips against mine
You are living proof
Of the great inspiration, inspirations divine
To me; you are light, that'll guide
Oh Great God, your wisdom true!
I know now, that I am dreaming of you!
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--Venus Macleod

"Romeo, Romeo, where for art thou Romeo?
Deny thy father and refuse thy name,
and if thou wilt I shall no longer be a Capulet!"
-William Shakespeare "Romeo and Juliet"



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Lighthousebob
Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
1 posted 2000-07-02 06:56 PM


I hope that you keep dreaming and sharing those heavenly dreams of the One who truly loves you.  A beautiful expression of a supernatural experience.

Bob <><

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2000-07-02 07:00 PM


Truly lovely..."I know now that I'm dreaming of you"....wonderful!   Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

ellie LeJeune


Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-07-02 09:58 PM


Very beautifully done!  

Denise

chibi_dragon
Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 58

4 posted 2000-07-05 12:33 PM


Well...uh...um...rather pretty supernatural. The PERFECT definition of love!!  
--the cute dragon

Little_Spyro
Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA
5 posted 2000-07-06 02:22 AM


Well, I for one would know how love feels...I experience it deeply every time I see or hear my girlfriend...and I honestly think that she's a blessing from the Big Guy Upstairs Himself.   Here's to you, Ka--oops, er...well, whoever she is...


                         a very much in love
Little Spyro T. Dragon

midnightblues
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
6 posted 2000-07-06 10:06 AM


Wow...I always have romantic dreams, but this one is simply divine! Love it *S*

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

TAP2
Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211
Morris, Il USA
7 posted 2000-07-06 12:00 PM


Beautifully penned. The words you write let us all feel exactly what you must. That is a poets goal, is ti not?

TAP2

dr tung
Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 55
singapore
8 posted 2000-07-08 05:07 AM


this is a very sweet poem so magical it sounds
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