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Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
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0 posted 2000-06-29 07:36 AM


IN MEMORY OF TRACY TIBBEDEAUX
(metaphor challenge)

The beating of your still heart
Will always pump true blue
Through golden memories of your life
That remain shining through.

The vision of your dawning
Still keeps you as my friend
For the dusk of your sudden death
Can no nightfall ever end.

-Robert E. Michaud Jr.-





[This message has been edited by Lighthousebob (edited 06-29-2000).]

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kelieth
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 314
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1 posted 2000-06-29 12:14 PM


Great piece. Reminds me of someone I held very close.  Exellent job.

Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
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ireland
2 posted 2000-06-30 01:57 PM


beautiful written Bob, an excellent response to the challenge.

"monuments put from pen to paper turns me into a gutless wonder" Manic street preachers

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