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just_another_fe
Member

since 2000-02-05

Posts 483
MICHIGAN

0 posted 2000-02-07 02:27 PM

I found a big rock
but it's hard and cold.
No way to see in
and so heavy to hold.
I wonder whats in there
Is it shiney like gold?
I wonder what's in there.
Is it dirty and old?
I try to breal it open
cuz I wanna see
if that something in there
is maybe for me.
I hit is hard
but it only cracks.
Maybe I could peek in
if i could only relax.

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

1 posted 2000-02-07 07:08 PM

I'm glad that's not my heart.

That's open all the time

Nice poem !

jascanvey
Member

since 1999-12-26

Posts 130
England

2 posted 2000-02-07 07:41 PM

Lovely Angie, I have my fingers crossed for you.

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

3 posted 2000-02-08 04:58 PM

great poem!

Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*

Christopher

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

4 posted 2000-11-05 02:07 AM

great analogy - those hearts are hard to open sometimes!

Christopher

Alle'cram
Senior Member

since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

5 posted 2000-11-05 02:22 AM

Oh, I like, I like!! Really fun read.

kcsgrandma
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

6 posted 2000-11-05 01:38 PM

You really sure you want to get into such a hard heart? Nice poem, but I'd go look for something softer if I were you.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

a_little_girl
Member

since 2000-05-08

Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA

7 posted 2000-11-05 02:32 PM

The heart can be a cold thing. Especially when someone doesn't know love.
--Little Girl

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2000-11-05 03:18 PM

Sometimes, it's worth it to find the treasure within. . .

Great poem Angie, nice to see you back. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Suzanne Arlene
Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 377
Ontario, Canada

9 posted 2000-11-05 05:03 PM

Sometimes you just can't break into someones heart .Good poem

Suzanne

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

10 posted 2000-11-06 05:23 PM

hope you find what you want

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.

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