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MagnoliaBlue
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0 posted 2000-06-24 11:04 PM


~Until next time~


Always that empty space in my closet

where you hung your clothes from your suitcase...

Always that empty place in our bed

and the deep longing to touch your face .


Until your next visit darling

my heart and soul will miss you ...

When I can put my arms around you once again

and be lost in the ecstasy of two .


We laughed and we played

talked so much

made mad-passionate love all night...

Storing our memories in our hearts

happy

and feeling so right .


Thank you for this special time darling

just you and I and love ...

You are so deeply in my heart

and for that I thank God above.


© 6-24-00~CJB~

My treasure...my pleasure...my Skipper Jim



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brian madden
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1 posted 2000-06-25 06:32 AM


MagnoliaBlue, a wonderful poem, really enjoyed it.

"I see myself as an intelligent, sensitive human, with the soul of a clown which forces me to blow it at the most important moments".
Jim Morrison

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2 posted 2000-06-25 10:17 AM


MagnoliaBlue~
Quite beautiful thoughts.
~*Marge*~


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MagnoliaBlue
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3 posted 2000-06-27 01:22 PM


Thank you both!

Now... if I could only
find my muse...I could be
whole again!  


MagnoliaBlue


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BSC
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4 posted 2000-06-27 01:25 PM


Magnolia, This is so beautiful - "just you and I and love..."  I love this.  Bonnie
PrincessPoet
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5 posted 2000-06-27 01:38 PM


Magnoila,
My heart beats to the warmth of this poem,
beautifully done by you
Like, a Hallmark Card,
)
Rich n sentiment
Heartfelt Poetic Expression.


Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up.
-Yoruba Proverb

Poetry & Friendship,
PrincessPoet


kelieth
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6 posted 2000-06-28 09:41 AM


Excellent job. Beautiful work of art.  

Kevin

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Munda
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7 posted 2000-07-02 06:05 AM


Beautiful expresssion of you love. Enjoyed it much.
dr tung
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8 posted 2000-07-02 07:01 AM


makes my heart grow heavy having read it
nice poem

a_little_girl
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9 posted 2000-07-02 01:54 PM


MagnoliaBlue,
I totally know how you're feeling when you wrote this. Love is a rather beautiful but painful feeling that we all have at least once in our lifetime.  /
--Venus

Lighthousebob
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10 posted 2000-07-02 06:31 PM


A romantic tribute to Love.  Bob <><
MagnoliaBlue
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11 posted 2000-07-05 09:35 PM


Bonnie,Princess,
Kevin,
Munda,DrTung,
a_little_girl
and Bob...Thank you
all for your comments.
They are very much
appreciated! They all help
me to grow poetically!

MagnoliaBlue


~My Skipper Jim
I love you!
Your Lady June~

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