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kaile
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0 posted 2000-06-24 08:07 PM


Setting sun sinks dark~
Still slogging for a living~
Rising sun shines bright

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Jeremiah Johnson
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1 posted 2000-06-25 01:55 AM


good work love the play word play that is. i like this piece keep it up.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


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2 posted 2000-06-25 10:35 AM


Kaile~
Lovely
~*Marge*~


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Ted Reynolds
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3 posted 2000-06-26 06:57 AM


Lovely indeed, Kaile.  Neatly phrased.  Speaks to all of us ever-optimistic wage-slaves.  And, personally, thank you.
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