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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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Celestial pageant The actors know well their parts On this moonless night Meteor, stage left Plunges with rapid descent Waves its' flaming tail Supporting cast wink On cue, not in unison Orchestrated light [This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 06-22-2000).] |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Dennis, you really created a beauty here. Everything hangs together perfectly. Excellent work.  |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Brother, You just keep getting better and better at inscribing these Haiku's. This one is outa this world!!!>>>>>>>SMILES<<<<<<<<< David< !signature--> "GOD GIVES- but man must open his hand." (German Proverb) [This message has been edited by deleeme (edited 06-21-2000).] |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
ooooh, Dennis, this one is positively "heavenly"! Your best yet, that's cause all you write just keeps getting better! "Orchestrated light" I love that line! more, more! Love, Sis C):?) Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. ellie LeJeune |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Yep yep yep, this should definitely be put in the book! Great job, Dennis! Hmm...then again, when isn't your work NOT a great job?  Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Dennis, you know how i feel about your haiku, dont you...always enjoy your wit, your delightful sense of humour and this one is no exception |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
beautiful dennis Supporting cast wink On cue, not in unison Orchestrated light really enjoyed. "I see myself as an intelligent, sensitive human, with the soul of a clown which forces me to blow it at the most important moments". Jim Morrison |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Great Dennis. Don't know how you do it these haiku's. |
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PrincessPoet Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133Long Beach, Calif. |
Hello Dennis! I've been ill a while but, reading your work is a definite Welcome Back  !Poetry & Friendship Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up. -Yoruba Proverb Poetry & Friendship, PrincessPoet |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Thanks to ALL of you for your kind comments! Allan...Thanks for your comments! David...FAR OUT! Ellie...You say the kindest things! Sam.....Stop, I'm Blushing! kaile...I Know...thanks for your support! Brian...Thank you so much! Munda...I don't know either LOL but it's fun! PrincessPoet...I'm Flattered,Welcome back HOME! Glad you're feeling better! Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dennis~ This is a pure joy to read. Thank you for sharing it with us. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
When I look at the stars tonight I will think of this... |
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