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Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
Atmospheric Energy Thy castle sits amid thine strongest power yet thee energy of one atmospheric storm could send thy walls crumbling to ground. Thine sky as blue like wet crystal sapphires sunray's brush painting thy pale pigment tan loud seagulls dancing off baby waves tickling. Thine eyes entrench thy beauty of distance touching thy closeness with reflectiveness whilst within my visions grasp this moment tomorrow's atmospheric energy could destroy. |
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Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
I'm not sure I like this one all that much. It started as I was imagining building a sand castle on the beach. I'm not sure I like the ending, so I could use some idea on this one if anyone feels the same. ~Thanks~ |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Esmeralda, Thy strong facade, effervescent, Glistening in the gentle sun, May soon realize its own frailty, When the Atmospheric anger comes! Just a thought! Dennis :^) |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
I like this it depicts to me the unpredictability of nature and the furry it can contain. I like this one.  Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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