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deleeme
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0 posted 2000-06-05 10:19 AM


(Note: I was there and Dennis was fantastic!)

Among the talented and ambitious
My fortunes had brought me,
To witness array of emotions
Well shared through their poetry.

An occasion to show off skills
Ignited by high energy,
To laugh and cry and be amused
Taken in by their poetry.

Over midway through the program
A newcommer we do see,
Stands up front and center
To display his brilliancy.

Emboldened by his room of peers
His moments fear, we do not see,
He launches into his own special wares
With finesse, waxes flawlessly!

Before the event is all o'er
Tho' extended by many a read,
We're all warmed by the richness of feelings
"Twas good to be here," all agreed!


[This message has been edited by deleeme (edited 06-05-2000).]

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BSC
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1 posted 2000-06-05 10:49 AM


Sounds like it was wonderful David....Much applause to Dennis.....Bonnie
ellie LeJeune
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2 posted 2000-06-05 12:12 PM


David; Wow, sounds like Dennis did a terrific job. Sure wish I could have been there. This poem is terrific and they could have done well to have you up there among them.

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Lost Dreamer
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3 posted 2000-06-05 09:09 PM


I knew he could do it and do it well, I bet one of his greatest joys this day was having you there in the audience.   Great poem here describing the affair, you both are so talented.  
Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
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4 posted 2000-06-05 10:32 PM


Sounded like a great evening, getting to sip from so many different cups. Hope we get to see the winning poem.   marcy
Denise
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5 posted 2000-06-06 09:10 AM


Sounds like a wonderful evening that you got to share with Dennis, David! Great poem about it!  

Denise

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