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Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2000-06-04 09:41 AM

*As you can probably tell, I am on a haiku and senryu fetish, I just love them!

~AUTUMN LEAVES HAIKU~

Autumn leaves falling
all the colours of the earth
carpeting the ground

*By Melissa Honeybee*

Jon Mewett
Senior Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

1 posted 2000-06-04 09:44 AM

Lovely image here Mel just lovely

Jon

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

2 posted 2000-06-05 05:59 AM

hey, great Haiku Melissa..
yeah, now THAT's what I call a carpet.. lol

lovely..

-Lynne

Jana Tovey
Member

since 2000-05-30

Posts 257
USA

3 posted 2000-06-05 07:20 AM

I like the textures and tones here. Beautiful.

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

4 posted 2000-06-05 10:18 AM

Melissa,
You Go Girl!, Love your haikus! Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

5 posted 2000-06-05 06:21 PM

I love your haiku, wonderful as always. I also love autumn leaves but I am not in the mood for them as the summer is here. How about a summer Haiku Melissa? by the way while we are on the subject of haiku's what are the guide lines for writing one. I am feel a bit silly for asking that. please don't laugh, I am just faking what I know about poetry. LOL

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Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

6 posted 2000-06-05 10:26 PM

...very nice...doing a great job. marcy

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