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Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
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0 posted 2000-05-31 07:42 AM


Lovely lady bug
Delicately spotted shell
Hides its' fragile wings

.........................


  Moonbeams radiate
As the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance!

D.L.White :^)


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childomine
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1 posted 2000-05-31 12:20 PM


Such a feeling of gentleness in this poem.  Very sweet Dennis.
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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2 posted 2000-05-31 05:45 PM


Lovely, Dennis. I could use a few in my garden! #:^}   (I'm getting good at it, huh?

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Jana Tovey
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since 2000-05-30
Posts 257
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3 posted 2000-06-01 08:07 PM


And so they do!  
Honeybee
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4 posted 2000-06-02 08:20 AM


What a serene and beautiful haiku!  Dennis, you really are very talented when it comes to haikus, keep sharing more with us!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

Jon Mewett
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5 posted 2000-06-02 10:13 AM


Gossamer fine Dennis.

Delicate

Jon

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6 posted 2000-06-03 03:44 AM


delicate lovely piece of work
passing shadows
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7 posted 2004-12-25 11:16 AM


nice
Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
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8 posted 2006-04-09 06:45 PM


Very gentle - I love it Dennis!

Bless your cotten sockies, you poetic maniacs. ^_^

Love - Lynne

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
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Michigan, U.S.A.
9 posted 2006-04-10 02:04 PM


Thank you Yu Lan for your kind words and bringing this poem back to the Light of Day.
God Bless
Dennis :^)



Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)



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