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childomine
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

0 posted 2000-05-25 10:34 PM


I twirl around
and laugh with glee,
the beat of the music
takes over me.
I step and I sway,
I spin and I dip,
I too am a klutz
but don't give a s--t!
Music fills me with joy
I feel free on the floor
I won't sit to rest
my soul cries out for more.
What better place to dance?
Where is a better club?
Then the one my friends frequent,
a place called the Corner Pub?
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 ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
          Black Eagle
    Oglala Sioux holy man



[This message has been edited by childomine (edited 05-25-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Kim Soule - All Rights Reserved
Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
1 posted 2000-05-26 07:23 AM


Awesome, I love your poem, it's perfect for the challenge. It is so upbeat and spirited, great job.  
JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
2 posted 2000-05-26 09:49 AM


Lets dance all night everybody!  Tango, mambo! LOL!

Joy

breezeinnc
Junior Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 47
USA
3 posted 2000-05-26 09:09 PM


Wonderful
To twirl and dance forever and a day.

breezeinnc

William P Bussey
Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 188

4 posted 2000-05-26 09:57 PM


Kim, your a kick, that sounds like something I would do, care free and I like it.
dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
5 posted 2000-05-28 05:39 PM


i usually dance in the dark!!..but a dance in the pub sounds fun too     

i like the fun, happy-go-lucky, dont-give-a-d*mn attitude!!

you dance!!  


 "A Poet's life is on written page; a scenario to take the stage--watch..." dgvarner

kaile
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singapore
6 posted 2000-05-28 07:55 PM


nice one childomine--Ditto lost dreamer's comments--your ending was perfect for the challenge and i chuckled when i read it..
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