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Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

0 posted 2000-01-29 06:04 PM



These are some things I wrote years ago in Dutch and translated only recently, which is a lot harder than I thought. LOL


Time
is infinite
hours can fly
minutes can crawl
you’ll never have
time enough
whether you are
in need of
or have too much
at the end
we’ll all say
I did not have
time enough

Violence is an irrepressible outburst of fear.
Master your fears and find peace.

Youth
flies by
happy-go-lucky,
carefree,
unconcerned
never sees trouble
you do not wish
when you’re young
and so much want back
once you’re older
but,....  
are we not as young
as we feel at heart ?

Dreams

how wonderful
to dream
a dream for you
to hide in
find serenity
escape from reality,
even for a moment
see each and every
illusion come true
dreams are beautiful
dreams are fleeting
dreams are deception ?
or maybe,
just maybe
not ?


Munda

P.S. For who's interested, my Workshop poem is posted in the Dark Forum. I thought it to be a little bit too dark for here. : )



[This message has been edited by Munda (edited 01-29-2000).]

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Little_Spyro
Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA
1 posted 2000-01-29 06:23 PM


You know, I wonder if this would sound better in Dutch...
But no matter what language this would be in (Cebuano might sound nice--it's a language from the central Philippines), this would sound perfect.  

-Little Spyro T. Dragon

Gene
Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935
Colorado, USA
2 posted 2000-01-29 06:47 PM


Very nice, Munda. I can especially relate to the first one. If you look at my reply to PdV in my post "Saturday," you'll see why.

~Gene  

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-01-29 07:58 PM


These are wonderful, Munda!  Thanks for taking the time to translate these for us!  



Denise

Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
4 posted 2000-01-29 09:10 PM


I loved this!  Time has always been a favorite for me to write about.  I have some wonderful friends who are Dutch.  I can almost here that lovely accent in your poem.

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)

Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
5 posted 2000-02-02 05:32 PM


Sam - LOL I don't know if it sounds better in Dutch. I do know it sounds very different  

Gene - I read it   Thanks for reading and replying  

Denise - You're very welcome  

Martie - I do have that "lovely" accent, although I don't think it's lovely  

Gene
Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935
Colorado, USA
6 posted 2000-02-02 05:43 PM


Hi Munda,

I saw your reply to my post, "Love and Hate" last night in Open#5. I just wanted you to know that I thought that was a very sweet thing for you say. That made me sleep well too. I replied to you hoping you would see it just before you signed off for the night.

It wasn't anything much,
I was just trying to impress you
With my Dutch.  

~Gene

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

7 posted 2000-02-02 06:40 PM


Munda, this is SO great...I dont know how I missed it the other day...but Im so glad I found it...its beautiful in any language
take care, janet marie

 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie



Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
8 posted 2000-04-14 06:00 AM


Wonderful.. Very good.. I like it alot.. *smiles*

 MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU,
MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK
MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE
THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS
AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN,
MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND

Irish Blessing

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