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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
I concentrated on her The blue belt that she wore My thoughts were all about her Of what she was before With a look she sought; She grabbed then caught Me, running for the door I sat myself inside her White wisps that floated by I placed my hands beside her And felt she was to cry With a sigh so pained; She shook then rained Her teardrops from the sky I remove myself now from her My soul is falling through The winds that whip about her Are pulling me toward you With eyes deceiving; She wept thus leaving Me, to find what I must do |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
Hey Bob!! Welcome to the pub =] I also read spirit dance and i like your style....it's kinda....mystical and whimsical all in one =] i like this poem alot,i'd like to know who 'she' represents...Anyways great poems and welcome again...i'm lookin; forward to more!! ««Swampie»» And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Thank you for replying, and thanks for my oh so warm welcome. "She" in this work could refer to two things...I didn't do that intentionally but I was told by a friend who read it that it did. First, I wrote this poem about the sky and the clouds.."She" is Mother Earth, "The blue belt that she wore" is the sky.."white whisps" are clounds yadda yadda..."She" can also be interpretted as a woman, and the poem is dealing with her "first time" written from her lovers perspective. I hope that all helps, and thak you so much. Also there are like 5 poems of mine here, all posted today, read'em if you like! |
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