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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere 
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Memories... Your laughing face Eyes following me From place to place Heart break... Remembering your gone Death was not faked Radio plays our song Tears... Salty rivers of pain Flow throughout years Grieve over your name Healing... Time still moves on Morning birds sing New birth, new dawn Forget... Never shall I lose Memory of when we met How I still miss you. I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A very sad, bittersweet poem to read. I know all too well how this feels. Very well written and expressed, and the presentation was unique.  Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
This is beautiful Angel. Makes me think of my two brothers who are no longer here to make new memories with. |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
I loved it! I especially like how you made verses from single words, making the lines beneath seem like definitions of your own heart. Very deeply felt, the sorrow, the mourning, the pain, and even a soft smile and wave goodbye. I enjoyed this very much, and was reminded of many mournful moments myself. Thank you! |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Melissa and WHB: Thankyou. As for uniqueness, I have no clue what I was doing when I wrote this. It was done in about ten minutes, and is no where near the style I normally write in. Like a forbidden whisper in my ear, I just heard the words.  Seeing how I was in the Pub anyways, I wrote down what I heard. But thanks again.  Childomine: Thankyou, too. It makes me think of too many people no longer here to make memories with. I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell. |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Angel, This is beautifully written. Love remains, with the memories, when we loose someone we love. |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
touching, very moving poem. reminds me of my friend and confidant that I lost a few years ago. Don't change a thing my friend, let it flow. |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Hmmm...reminds me of the friend I lost. He was the star of Lost Heart...your poem was rather touching. |
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