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I am (my Whole) ((answer to challange part 3))
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Strosek Member
since 2000-04-08
Posts 61Fourways, Gauteng, South Africa |
I am me, crafted by God’s hands I wonder why my life was touched by his will I hear his call, and the actions I must follow I see his power, a taste of it in me I want His blessing on all I do I am me, crafted by God’s hands I pretend to hate, so that my heart is protected I feel lost in a sea of emotion I touch walls on others hearts I worry my actions may not always be right I cry when others share their pain I am me, crafted by God’s hands I understand what path my life travels on I say Judge me for me, not what I once was I dream of a future, I may never see I try to take others pain, without changing me I hope to change others, without destroying me I am me, crafted by God’s hands May the light of day always shine during the darkest of nights. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Out of the three I like this one the best. I do think your other two led you to this one, so they were worth what you put into them, cause I love this one.  |
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Strosek Member
since 2000-04-08
Posts 61Fourways, Gauteng, South Africa |
 Ok, I thought I better explain my actions for the three posts. Any way, I goanna post this note in all three poems, just in case people decide to read them in a different order or something like that.The reason for the three posts work like this: (My Better half) This is me 90% of my life, how I devote my time and my view towards others.) (My other half) as nay of you have seen with my other poems I went through a very dark time in my life, this is 10% of my life which I let free everyonce in a while. (My Whole) This explains my view on myself at all times this is my reason for doing the things I do. Thanks for hearing me out. May the light of day always shine during the darkest of nights. |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
 I finished my cigerette and I'm still speechless. So, I'll say challege well met indeed, for all three. And this one is just, wow..  I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell. |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Some good sentiments expressed here Strosek A Fine Finale...well done Jack |
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