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blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
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Denver, CO

0 posted 2000-05-08 01:43 PM


Anne

Your smile lights up my day
Your eyes light up my life
Your hugs surround the way I am
Your heart lives within me
Your hands surround my every touch
And my life is death without you
For you are me,
In a sense my soul
What helps me breath
I call you Anne,
You deserve a name
You are more holy, pure, and spiritual
Than I
You are more patient, strong, and caring
Than I
You, Anne, are more
Than I could ever be


A little thought that I wrote a long time ago when I was struggling with my inner being and accepting myself for who I am

I believe that Anne lives inside us all.  I chose that name for her, after a friend who committed suicide in June of 1999.

I hope that all of you can come to be very well acquainted with your inner being, or your Anne, as I like to refer to her.

Sorry I rambled so much about this, it just means a lot to me, probably not nearly that much to you.

Thank you.
Alicia A. Renzelman


[This message has been edited by Alicia Renzelman (edited 05-08-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Alicia R - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-05-08 02:35 PM


This is very touching and very beautifully done, Alicia!

Denise

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

2 posted 2000-05-09 03:06 AM


I've struggled with my twin
That enemy within
'Till both of us fell by the way

Sometimes 'Anne' can be hard to cope with for some people,I think it's a conscience kind of a thing.to be your true self.

Don't you?

Jon

Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
3 posted 2000-05-09 08:06 AM


I must admit,  I'm speechless.  Beautiful both the poem and the ending message.  

 I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell.

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