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Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

0 posted 2000-01-28 06:56 PM



This is an old one from Open#3. I thought you might like it.  


Walk with me, the path of life,
to explore every bend of the road
Enjoy with me the beauty of  life,
along its wonderful way

Find comfort with me, in each others arms,
when grief crosses our path
Find strength with me, in each others strength,
when despair lies in wait

Laugh with me, a single true laugh,
to enlighten another's distress
Cry with me, a single true tear,
to understand true happiness

Cherish with me, the wonders of life,
as they need to be preserved
Rejoice with me, in the mysteries,
of what is yet to be

Find peace with me, in each others souls,
when the world has gone insane
Find love with me, in each others hearts,
until this life has been fulfilled

And when the path comes to an end
I hope we can say from within
We've known the beauty of true love,
our love came from within


Munda

© Copyright 2000 Munda - All Rights Reserved
Gene
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since 2000-01-23
Posts 935
Colorado, USA
1 posted 2000-01-28 07:10 PM


It may be old, but it's beauty hasn't faded. Thanks for sharing that, Munda. With the huge amount of posting in these forums, it's easy for some really great poems to get lost. It's nice that it was brought back for others to remember and for new peole to have a chance to see it.  

Thanks, ~Gene

Little_Spyro
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since 2000-01-09
Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA
2 posted 2000-01-28 07:23 PM


Second, second the motion!
This is a beautiful poem, and I'm glad you brought it to the Pub, Munda!  
Maybe the author could give me some tips as to how to make a poem as good as that...

Denise
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Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-01-28 07:37 PM


I'll be back to read this later, Munda, my friend just got here and we're ordering pizza! Be back in a couple of hours!!

Denise

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

4 posted 2000-01-28 08:32 PM


Munda,
this poem is exquisite...it is truly beautiful...I was warmed by the emotions expressed in it...you so perfectly described
the contentment two find when the love is perfect and real. Im so glad you reposted it so it could be shared again, for al of us who had not seen it.   Janet Marie

 ..."She says baby,
It's 3am I must be lonely,
When she says baby,
Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes,
Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it."
Matchbox20

Denise
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5 posted 2000-01-28 11:23 PM


Yes, Munda, this is so beautiful! A perfect description of true love!!

Denise

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
6 posted 2000-01-29 12:45 PM


Yes...lovely...serene.... beautiful. Thank you for reposting it!  

Munda
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since 1999-10-08
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7 posted 2000-01-30 05:48 PM


Thanks everybody.   Eventhough the relation ended, this poem still gives me a special feeling.  


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
8 posted 2000-02-01 02:49 PM


Why Munda, this sounds almost like a prayer, so in that essence, you haven't lost anyone!

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow



Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
9 posted 2000-04-14 05:55 AM


Truly heart warming.. I really find this a wonderful piece of art..

 MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU,
MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK
MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE
THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS
AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN,
MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND

Irish Blessing

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
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Floating gently on a cloud....
10 posted 2000-04-14 06:09 AM


Beautiful poem....I never saw it before, thanks for reposting it!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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