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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere 
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tears fall, but go unheeded voices heard, but none are needed hope lies in wait around the bend can't make it there, is this the end? trying hard, struggling free stuck in last place. why always me? MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU, MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN, MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND Irish Blessing |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Great message in a neat package here.  I enjoyed it because I often write in the same way. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
You'll get round that bend and down the straight to the finish line too Angel. May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out. Irish proverb. |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
I know what you mean here Angel! Most of the time I feel I will never reach around the bend and see a ray of hope or understanding. It kills me slowly in around the heart area too. Be Strong! We who write about it are, you know!! Thanks for all your comments by the way! ~~Jamie    "I keep breaking all the promises That I keep making to myself You'd think by now that I'd be over this Instead I'm feeling sorry for myself So why does everything seem desperate now? I should be feeling so alive But it feels like something's missing Something's wrong somehow It feels like something deep inside has died..." --Stabbing Westward |
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breezeinnc Junior Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 47USA |
Dont we all feel this at one time or another? That its we who never finish or are last. Been there too...but hope........ breezeinnc |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I think that life is like a mountain range, many ups and downs forming our existence. You'll get around that bend...don't give up. Your poem expresses the valley of despair rather beautifully. Thanks for sharing this. Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Meg Junior Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 12Manila, Philippines |
don't worry, you'll get through it. i liked this ... actually, i'm sending this to a friend. : ) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well done, BWA! Denise |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
An easy to read well written poem Nicole although a trifle sad. It's not really the end. Just look round the bend There is no last place Life's not really a race. Jack [This message has been edited by twinsgd (edited 05-08-2000).] |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Temptresss- Thankyou. John- Everyone always hopes so. Thanks. Wikket- Thanks and no problem. I enjoy your work. breezeinnc- Hope is what gets everyone through life. Thankyou. ESP, dsnyder, Twinsgd- Thankyou. Meg- That's always a good compliment. Thankyou. To oppose you is to deny the heart of friendship... To join you is to deny the heart of humanity. I am the earth... the fire... you are the sea and wind. Should we together be god? Or apart be nemesis... |
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