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blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
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Denver, CO

0 posted 2000-05-01 12:36 PM


A simple wish

A tender embrace in the morning
A soft and warm kiss
Someone to wake up to
Solid romance
Everlasting love
What I wish I could find

A hand held
A thought shared
A good memory that stays
Quiet time
Forever together
What I wish I could find

Undying passion
No longer alone
Someone who means
Everything to me
Love heals everything
What I wish I could find

I am sooo glad to finally be back!  Sorry to say though, that I still have NO inspiration.  Although, I am looking forward to your replies to this one.  It means a LOT to me.  Well, enjoy your day here in the Pub.  While I was gone, some new people joined, it makes me SO happy!


 Life defines no more than what it is you ask for.
April 20, 2000
Alicia A. Renzelman

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-05-01 12:55 PM


This is very beautifully done, Alicia! Good to see you back! Sure sounds like you have inspiration to me!

Denise

childomine
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since 2000-01-25
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2 posted 2000-05-01 01:07 PM


This is very good Alicia.  I believe most want this one wish.
John the cat
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since 2000-03-23
Posts 357
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3 posted 2000-05-02 03:34 PM


Lovely words Alicia. Doesn't seem too much to ask.

 May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out.

Irish proverb.

blackhalo
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4 posted 2000-05-02 03:53 PM


Thanks guys, you make me feel so loved!  LOL!  You all make me feel like my simple wish has been fulfilled.  I am really struggling right now with this whole writer's block thing, but it's at it's peak, so soon it should receed.  It looks like this time, I'll get through it!
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 Life defines no more than what it is you ask for.
April 20, 2000
Alicia A. Renzelman


[This message has been edited by Alicia Renzelman (edited 05-02-2000).]

ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....
5 posted 2000-05-02 04:11 PM


Nice to see you back. Alicia!! Remember me? Anyway, I hope your writer's interlude fades away soon so that your pen may spew with wonderful works! This poem,by the way, gave me much pleasure!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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