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No-one and Everyone .. A Diamond Poem
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand 
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No-one and Everyone No-one, lonely, silent, empty, cold, solitary, echoes, sadness, look, laughter, hugs, warm, crowded, happy, company, friendly, everyone |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
ooooohh...concrete poetry is one of my favourites! i like the choice of phrases you use,progressing from "no-one" to "everyone"....love that diamond shape lots too   will post one of my efforts for you too |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lol....I can remember doing those things in primary school!! Have to admit though, they sure weren't even nearly as good as this one!!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice, Yu Lan! Great progression from no-one to everyone! Denise |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Can say no more than the other posts. Very good and loved the way the poem progressed from nothing to everything. ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Thanx all! ^_^ hehe, yeah, I just learnt this form a few weeks ago, 'coz one of my younger friends was doing one in class.. mm.. I never really did much poetry in primary school.. *_^ Oooh, ooh, forgot to post the form, just in case someone didn't see it.. ok u have two opposites, and they are the first and last lines of the poem... then u have two words relating to the first line.. and so on.. until u reach the middle line.. then u have two words relating to the first line, a transition word, (a word that is kinda neautral perhaps.. links one opposite to the other) and two words for the last opposite.. yeah, well get the idea. ^_^ thank you ppl! Lynne |
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