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PrincessPoet Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133Long Beach, Calif. |
Sitting here on a Saturday thinking about u're lack of love 4 me &, Why? 2 people like us could go wrong... I loved u, throughout the Depth of me Everyday & with every Breath of me I Exhale, exceedingly with the Longing- 4 true Love... when u'll fix your desires 2 want 2 make love 2 me? Now, I'm Sitting here on a Saturday with cold chills penetrating skin, mass & bone realization shone that when I go home... I'll be sharing my bed all alone- By myself rewinding back my tears & Goodbyes 4 your lack of love & affection & the reasons: Why? I requested u leave & now; I'm sitting here on a Saturday; watching the hustle & bustle of people getting on with their Lives & it Almost, looks meaningless -Today: not having someone 2 share Love, Life & Laughter with me/ I can't help but, look upward the sky,... its sooo Blue not a Cloud in its way & there's no one 2 hold me- on this First day,without U. I'm just Sitting Here On a Saturday. "PrincessPoet" This Poem was written 10/99. I pushed my now Finance away because, of my condition was continously getting worse and he was being distant. (All is well Now  )< !signature-->Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up. -Yoruba Proverb Poetry & Friendship, PrincessPoet [This message has been edited by PrincessPoet (edited 04-29-2000).] |
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Jester59701 Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 154 |
PrincessPoet, I'm glad things are going better for you now. Very nice poem, what do the #'s add up to? I hope you spend your saturdays writing more good poems like this now. Jester |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
This was an interesting poem and then the footnote made it so much better or easier to take. Enjoyed the read and hope things are well for you. Since it was raised by Jester ,have been trying to make something out of the numbers....no luck yet LOL Need a hint.....LOL Jack |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I am very glad that things are better for you now....this poem is a lovely expression of the painful emotion you felt. Lol..I can't make sense of the numbers either! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This was interesting in the way you wrote it, and I am also glad you are happy now. I added up the numbers to 24, but I think you were just using them for a different effect in a poem, could I be correct or is their a symbolism here? |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i will be glad 2 sit here on a saturday 2 read delightful poetry from U ") can't make sense of the numbers either...do tell us! |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Hi! sorry, haven't been here for a while.. Hey, this is neat! ^_^ (ooh ooh, everyone else has mentioned the numbers.. don't wanna be left out.. ^_^ "the numbers" lol) mmm.. kinda sad.. but I am glad things are ok now.. *_^ Hugz.. Lynne |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
PP Great read I like your creativity with this one.Very interesting. Nice work Jon |
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PrincessPoet Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133Long Beach, Calif. |
Thanks All! For your comments, the numbers were included 4 creative affect only,but it's a good idea maybe I'll try something next time. Again Thanks! Poetry & Friendship |
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