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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
This is about a woman who constantly reminded me of the bending tree. So strong, resilient and always sound. Her story is something like the tree’s silent song. Through sleet, snow pelting rain. Playful moving earth shifts and sways the roots. Rhythmically leaves rustle in gentle breeze. In the caress of spring This blessed tree remains. Slowly the leaves begin to stretch with laziness. Bark begins to breathe. Like the strength of the tree. Steadfast she stands, solidly. She is nature in motion, words and song. And with it’s beautiful grace she’ll always stand strong. Like the tree along the river caught in a flash flood. The muddied ground slippery, yet somehow sound. Now the truth to this fable is really about me. Through nature’s adversities; I always push harder stand taller, still. No boulders will push me over I’ve regained my will. Kdw,Copyright 5/00 |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
KimW, Loved this poem. The analogy of the strong old tree, firmly rooted on solid ground, flexible, bending, yet standing tall. I love this strong poem. Looking forward to more. Blessings, marcy |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dear Kim: What a woman that you know yourself so well! This analogy is written with beauty and it flows with each word. The grace is there for all of us to weather those storms. You have accepted the gift and the Giver, so you flourish! Ellie 02 |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Kim, I enjoyed this one- the flexiblity of faith, the toughness of conviction, the bark of patience, the sway of Grace-cann all help us be like you at your best as pictured by your tree. Thank you for sharing this, David "GOD GIVES- but man must open his hand." (German Proverb) |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
A delightful piece. Often I look at huge trees out my window thinking how the storms both clean and strengthen them. |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
Thank you Alle, Ellie, Dave, and sandgrain for your warmth, Inspiration and faith - it shines through all of you ! *smile* Kim |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I'd say if only we could weather the storms like a tree. We don't always see it but we do come through it! I love the analogy you used here  <*\\\>< Our background and circumstances may have influenced who we are, but we are responsible for who we become. |
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Kim - What a wonderful poem! Great analogy and imagery. "And with it's beautiful grace, she'll always stand strong." Wow. Bonnie |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
WhtDove and Bonnie - Thank you! I love this Forum. I am among some of the most Inspiring and warm people here and it feels like home! Bonnie, I wondered where you were! I browsed through the other day and did not see anything new posted by you. To be honest, I am always very moved and pulled by your writing. Please do not ever leave this Forum.. and if you ever do, please tell me where you wander to.. I enjoy your writing so very much. Kim |
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Kim- Thank you for your kind replies to my poems....I just wanted to tell you that I just visited your site....It's terrific, and your works are wonderful. I'll visit there often. Oh yeah, we share the same birthday too....except....mine would be 195?oops.... Bonnie |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
Bonnie, (Sincerely) Thank you! I promise I shall not forget your Birthday! We do not have to give away our ages either!! ehehehe Kim |
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