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Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184
Missouri

0 posted 2000-03-29 04:47 PM


(I didn't realize how long this was going to be when I started, and everytime I started to write I thought the end was just around the corner, but I found that was not how it was turning out, so from now on I am just going to post one poem a day in this series till it is over with. (like a soap opera maybe or your (One a day pill.) whatever!

Coming home to Canaan
The brothers told Jacob their father
About everything that had happened in Egypt
Of the silver in their brother's sack
And how they were to bring Benjamin back.

Then as they were emptying the rest of their sacks
In each bag was found his pouch of sliver
Right before their eyes.

In astonishment and fright
Jacob lamented
"You have deprived me of my children
Joseph is no more!
Now you want to take Benjamin too!
Everything's against me!
If harm comes to Benjamin
My gray head
Will go down to the grave
Woe is me..
What am I to do?

Then Reuben feeling responsible
A father himself
Said, You may put both
My sons to death,
If I do not bring Benjamin back
Entrust him to my care
You have my solemn vow
He will be coming back.


[This message has been edited by Septsong (edited 03-29-2000).]

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Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
1 posted 2000-03-29 06:29 PM


Dear StepSong,  I think what you are doing is
great. Matter of fact, I am going to run copies and share the story with my grandchildren as a Bible Story. Just keep going, girl, can't wait for the next ones. God Bless Marcy

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2000-03-29 06:34 PM


dear Septsong; This wonderful story you are telling is so beautifully well written and a lovely gift to us all. I look forward to reading every word. Thank you, dear friend, for this gift. Love, Ellie

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deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
3 posted 2000-03-29 06:37 PM


Septsong,
  You have made quite an undertaking, and we are being blessed by your willinmgness to put your talents to work to share this with us.  I will continue to look for the installments at whatever pace you deem best for yourself.  This is good. and we see in this episode, how that despirate men will do despirate things--how true to life-Yet lifes so many centuries ago!  God bless you in Your efforts,   David

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
4 posted 2000-03-29 09:43 PM


One a day pill? LOL  You have done a most wonderful job with this. I applaud you!
You can post a couple a day if you wish to!

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