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sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
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Sycamore, IL, USA

0 posted 2000-03-17 01:04 PM


The Empty Egg

Once I read a story that stuck with me
About a spring project and student, Jeremy,
Who had a learning disability,
Causing some efforts to appear quite silly.

A plastic egg was given to each student
To hold some sign that new life was evident.
Buds, bugs, leaves, etc. were in eggs returned,
But Jeremy's was bypassed, in concern.

Perhaps he didn't understand
The new life project she had planned,
As he'd retuned his egg but it was empty,
So she ignored it to save the humility.

Jeremy raised his hand up high,
Asking, "Why didn't you open mine?"
"It's empty.  Didn't you know what to do?"
Jeremy smiled, "Yes, it's empty like Jesus' tomb"


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BSC
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1 posted 2000-03-17 01:41 PM


Oh Sandgrain, What a beautiful poem, and what a beautiful message...Thank you for sharing this...Bonnie
WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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2 posted 2000-03-17 02:56 PM


I remember that story. You've put into some wonderful verse.
deleeme
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3 posted 2000-03-17 10:10 PM


No one had the copyright on insight, and sometimes it seems to proceed from the most unlikely places.  I loved your poem, Sandgrain.  When it comes to Jesus tomb, we have every right to make something out of Nothing! Our fulness comes only because it was made empty!  Thank you for the precious reminder,   David

 "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw-



KimW
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4 posted 2000-03-17 10:25 PM


Very beautiful poem and message!
I am in awe with the feelings and warmth drawn from the poems in this section of the Forum! I look forward to reading more of yours.

Kim

Denise
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5 posted 2000-03-17 11:26 PM


Oh wow! This is wonderful, Sandgrain!  

Denise

ellie LeJeune
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6 posted 2000-03-17 11:43 PM


Dear Sandgrain; How lovely and what a wise little boy. He grasped what most people never get. love, ellie

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Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
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Southern Florida
7 posted 2000-03-18 07:29 AM


A lovely story and a lovely poem ...
Enjoyed this much, sandgrain .....

rwood
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since 2000-02-29
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8 posted 2000-03-18 08:40 AM


The wisest of them all, we overlook such applications of the heart so much. I'll treasure this piece!
Sincerely,
Rwood

sandgrain
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9 posted 2000-03-18 10:24 PM


Thank you Bonnie, David and Kim for reading and responding so kindly.  WhtDove, I'm amazed how you remember all these.  Denise, ellie, pepper and rwood, thank you each and I'm glad you all found the story touching.
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