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rwood
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since 2000-02-29
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Tennessee

0 posted 2000-03-05 04:32 PM



We are governed by law
In this lawless land
People rise to the occasion
To lead us to the promised land

One nation under God
Red, white and blue
As America turns its back
on the belief in you

Liberty and justice
Indivisible we stand
As our families fall victim
To some invisible hand

Love thy neighbor
Civil disputes
Their garbage spills over
Hurry to file suit

Freedom of speech
What did you say?
Now you know you can't pray
In our schools today

Become one and make many
has now become
Make many and don't settle
for just one

We fear for our children
Their safty from harm
Huggs and kisses are replaced
By our right to bear arms

Across this great nation
Zero tolerance in schools
As if even the adults
Play by the rules

Thou shalt not covet
As we keep up with the Jones'
Did you see their new pool?
I bet they look down their noses

Thou shalt not steal
On double coupon day
I didn't tell the cashier
I didn't buy that toothpaste

Thou shalt not have
No other God before me
As our children are babysat
with 40 hours of TV

With blackeyes and bruises
The wife lives in shame
A fine is given
And he's back at it again

Don't dare spare kind words
To those in despair
You know they must have done something
To put themselves there

Headlines and sensationalism
We cast stones, boulders, asteroids
USA Today
Grocery store tabloids

The Bible is sacred
and full of solutions
As we feverishly argue
Theories of evolution

Blindly autocratic
Liberal democractic
Republican views?
Depends on the news

Plea of Guilty
Luke warm lament
Technicalities
Of a well spoken president

Rubb those elbows
with people in power
You never know who will be above you
As you climb the career tower

Honor thy Mother and Father
If we ever find time
Maybe while we're stuck in traffic
And our cell phones don't die

Friday is the sabbath
For this we thank God
We live for the weekends
They are never long enough

Nobility wanes
To the nations poor
"Let them eat cake"
Or maybe crumbs on the floor

Freedom of the press
Captures our attention
Print that article
What is the media's intention?

Supply and demand
Built this great empire
Every day another dollar
What is "retire"?

We toss our elderly
To the sea side
Hoping they'll wash away
Who said they were wise?

Hey nobody's perfect
make the best of each day
Never hang your head low
Don't ever be ashamed

You are a Smith, Roberts
Or a Jones
You are better than this
Our Lawyers say so

Heathcare and insurance
You'd better be covered
Those BMW's and Mansions
Must be afforded

We label our churchs
Our religion is superior
Any other religion
Is always inferior

We battle the race
No matter the color
For God's sake
There can never be another

The prisons are full
Of those on death row
Waiting for the Governors
To Pardon their souls

Thou shalt not kill
We feed on who did it
Doesn't matter the death
Of anyone's spirit

We hail up great heros
Vainly we forget
Medals of honor
Has God won one yet?

Addictions and afflictions
Out of wed-lock births
Things like that
Aren't acceptable in church

Keep your chin up
Keep a positive attitude
It's all in the mind
They've got drugs for that too

Controversy?
Lack of faith?
What sort of attempt is this?

Self righteousness?
Blindness?
Unstable fits?

No....I beg you... apply your thoughts
The trumpet resounds for all of us
Cling to the beauty of the cross
And know in our hearts all is not lost

Controversy?
The world has its way
Of making it obvious
The need for Judgement Day


Where shall we find comfort within?
I Thessalonians 4:14-18 until then




[This message has been edited by rwood (edited 03-07-2000).]

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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-03-05 07:54 PM


r; WOW! Part of my brain wants to go into denial that it isn't that bad, but I can't, because it's all true. Their is a little more to the serenity prayer, part of it goes like this; " take this world as it is, not as we would have it". The answer is as you say, We are the answer as we stay close to God!
Thank you, this is a very incredible poem!
                  Love, Ellie

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rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
2 posted 2000-03-05 09:07 PM


Thanks Ellie. I'm glad you understood my constructive critical view. I won't dwell on this I promise! We truly are the answer. A close knit quilt of faith sewn with the expertise of those who have known God for a long time and the rest of us get woven in! Thanks so much for the perfect stitches you all are adding to my life.
Sincerley,
Rwood

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
3 posted 2000-03-05 09:08 PM


I LOVE IT! Also, I printed a copy. You have so much talent and it really shows in this piece, as well as others. You have hit the nail on the head with this one.
Alle

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
4 posted 2000-03-05 11:13 PM


WOW!  You know there are billboards going up in Chicago that say...
What part of thou shalt not...didn't you understand?

Yes, the Bible predicts it will get much worse as time comes to it's end here. And it is for sure. They may not allow kids to hold prayer in school, but we have to remember, you can pray ANYWHERE~ They can still pray there, or anywhere they are.  

This has said more than a mouthful, lots to ponder and think about.

BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
5 posted 2000-03-06 09:55 AM


r - WOW...I was wondering what I would think about today.....guess I know now!!!! What a great piece of work.  How sad that this is where the world is....and ignoring so many of today's problems isn't going to make them go away....as Ellie said, it's getting back to and staying close with God.  Thanks for sharing this eye-opening piece.  Bonnie
deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
6 posted 2000-03-07 05:38 AM


RWOOD,
I am awed, and humbled by this excellent assessment, and anwer to a good nation going awry.  You've sad a mouthful and a heartful--I think that this should be turned into a min-book or tract and widely distribute through out our nation, our churches, or homes.  It is a careful analysis with constructive criticism and a call back from  the brink.  A truly masterful work!
   David

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
7 posted 2000-03-07 05:39 AM


RWOOD,
I am awed, and humbled by this excellent assessment, and answer to a good nation going awry.  You've said a mouthful and a heartful--I think that this should be turned into a min-book or tract and widely distributed through out our nation, our churches, or homes.  It is a careful analysis with constructive criticism and a call back from  the brink.  A truly masterful work!
   David


 "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw-



deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
8 posted 2000-03-07 05:43 AM


I'm sorry I goofed in trying to edit my reply, correcting my spelling-- but this piece is so Good I think it needs to stay at the top for a long while, thank you & God Bless you, David
sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
9 posted 2000-03-07 04:40 PM


I, too have written of many of these same things, but separately, and of course never so elequently as you've composed this great piece.  I say AMEN to each of the above compliments and to David saying it twice(that's how things were emphasized in the bible..)  Thank you for writing and sharing this .  God bless.
rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
10 posted 2000-03-07 08:13 PM


Thanks everyone for the support and wonderful comments. There is so much more on the above subject. I know everyone could add to it forever. But Someday God will be our proverbial Statue of Liberty as we enter the gates of Heaven! Offering more than our dreams imagine. God bless you all  
Sincerely
Rwood

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