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Dennis L. White
Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-02-25 09:03 AM


Sunshine,
Blue Sky,
Puffy White Clouds,
Moonlight,
Rainbows.

Lightning Bugs,
Butterflies,
Lady Bugs.

Eagles
Penguins,
Peacocks,
Humming Birds.

Tulips,
Roses,
Sunflowers,
Dandelions.

Pet Dogs
(or Dragons?),
Koalas Bears,
Giraffes,
Monkeys.

Prime Rib (Medium Rare),
Chocolate (don't forget Chocolate).

Children's Laughter,
A Gentle Touch, a Hug,
A Babies Contented Sigh,
A Smiling Face,
A Kind Word,
A True Friend.

Some of these things if not all of these things
started in the mind of my Creator.
He knew I would need a pause
from the demands of this life
to experience the simple,
beautiful things,
to delight and
refresh
me
!


TO GOD BE THE GLORY !




 Poetry is the expression of thoughts which awake the higher and nobler emotions, or their opposites, with words arranged to some accepted convention.........or maybe not! Dennis :^)

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Songbird
Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184
Missouri
1 posted 2000-02-25 09:07 AM


Nice, reminds me of that song that goes, "these are a few of my favorite things". God certainly is generous with his creativity.
deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
2 posted 2000-02-25 05:56 PM


The style of this one is so neat, all these different or special things that God has put in this life, as you have so well put it all points to God's goodness and Glory. A Point well made.  You're doing just great, Bro.!

 "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw-



ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
3 posted 2000-02-25 06:52 PM


Dear Dennis; Beautiful poem! Welcome to this forum, you will find lots of love and encouragement here. I'm looking forward to more of your poetic wisdom!  Ellie
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

4 posted 2000-02-25 07:54 PM


Dennis...
"simply" perfect...
and thanks for remembering the chocolate
take care, janet marie

 ...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*


Stephen Jones
Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 53

5 posted 2000-02-26 12:46 PM


Dennis,

    This poem is delightful to me.  These are some of the "simple" pleasures it brings to me:  A break from high "theological" perplexities to take a relaxing stroll through the glorious works of God on a smaller scale.
(we need the high and lofty, but we need the meek and lowly as well!)

     It has a simple humor and charm that is very idyllic and pleasing to the heart.

     It mentions chocolate (which to my wife is perhaps on the verge of being a "graven image".  She would appreciate that!

     It does more than say stuff, it has a charming visual effect in the body.  That is a technique I have yet to experiment with in my writing.  Coooolll!

     It reminds me how creative our God is and how much he really loves and cares for us all.


Keep up the good work!

mirjam
Member
since 1999-11-24
Posts 246
Auckland, New Zealand
6 posted 2000-02-26 02:38 AM


Well the others seem to have covered it, but you certainly brought a smile to my face tonight!  It's the simple things we often forget to thank God for, and yet we'd notice if they weren't around.  Interesting to think that God thought to make these things before the world even began, just because he knew they would bring us delight.  Another great poem, i loved the visual effect there too!  
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
7 posted 2000-02-26 09:35 PM


WELCOME!  I love the format of this, I love the poem! This is great! So right to take notice of the smaller things and enjoy them.

Please check your email for something special.

[This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 02-26-2000).]

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

8 posted 2000-02-28 11:27 PM


This is lovely, Dennis!

Denise

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