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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2001-12-20 07:42 PM


Thy hands softly pull needle between the threads,
Sewing a picture I yet haven't understood;
Thy stitches lay down good paths for each step,
Though I lack of the comprehension of them;
Thy fingers hurt when a drop of red appear on the face of thy work,
As though the dot is on thy face;
Thy lovly thoughts often go unnoticed
Yet thy caring touch keeps an eye on us.

Oh, thy love... what shall I do with it.
Thy love is so great yet I'm such an underseved thing!-
I, who should bend on my knees,
Delay my thanks, my seeking of you.

//I've written a poem about sewing b4, but this is different. If you've read both, which one do you like better? (The poem was called 'Sewing')

~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.
~Just when I thought it is too far away, opportunity knocks the door

© Copyright 2001 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-21 06:20 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Eliza, this is such a powerfully emotional poem, sweet friend! (sigh) You deserve the most beautiful love, sweet friend, I wish this great happiness for you! (kiss on cheek) May tender hands of love forever caress your heart with joy! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-12-23 03:53 PM


This poem is as tender as the hands that did the sewing.  Joyce
strbbux
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3 posted 2001-12-23 03:58 PM


Very nice, very heartfelt poem. strbbux
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