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VAS
Member Rara Avis
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Oregon

0 posted 2001-09-03 01:07 PM


I began this one yesterday on my drive to joing my daughter and friends at a campground.  I was pondering the past 18 years.


A Prayer of Supplication

In youth I was strong
I went forward with confidence
     of stalwart naivete
And then,
     a huge chunk was taken from my side

It weakened
     and faltered my stride
Yet You were there
     You lifted me
     cradled me
While I took time to learn again
     how to walk

So often
     I feel as though I’m still crawling
     I pull myself to a stand, hanging on with all I am

A semblance of confidence returns
     enough, barely enough, that I let go

Yet, when I let go
     it seems I must take my eyes off You and Your promise
     what I see are high waves
     vipers half-crazed
     a gaping hole in my boat
     a tear in my sails

Help me keep my vision
     help me find the Stone upon which to stand
     take my hand
     renew my faith, spark my hope, help me rest
In You

© September 3, 2001

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
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Member Patricius
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1 posted 2001-09-03 11:07 PM


VAS:  Excellent!  A commitment I need to renew daily!

Betty Lou Hebert

VAS
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Oregon
2 posted 2001-09-03 11:12 PM


Thanks, Betty, and don't we all, and so often we try to think we don't have to renew the prayer, that we've got it covered. He does, but when we pray, we acknowledge that He does.
Right?

Joyce Johnson
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3 posted 2001-09-04 03:01 PM


This is a beautiful sentiment, acknowledging
your need for His care.  Joyce

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