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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2001-04-11 03:32 PM


In the gray of the concrete
coated in spring rains
there are mirrored images
of the many blessings
He’s provided...
home, haven, flora, fauna
sunlight drenched
in living water
bouncing off each
raindrop’s splatter
ripples in the heart of vernal equinox’ love drips

4/11/01

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
Washington State
1 posted 2001-04-12 01:21 PM


Oh, this is nice.  How did it get way down here without being answered?  Joyce
VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
2 posted 2001-04-12 01:54 PM


Not sure, but am happy you found it, thanks!
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Member Patricius
since 2001-03-09
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Idaho, USA
3 posted 2001-04-12 05:00 PM


This really shows us that God is everywhere! Good poem.

Betty Lou Hebert

sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
4 posted 2001-04-12 09:35 PM


Kind of like seeing the world in a grain of sand, only better to see His blessings in the rain.  Thanks for sharing.
    Rae

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
5 posted 2001-04-13 10:58 PM


VAS,

Your spiritual eyes are truly open to the blessings of God to see such wonder in a rain puddle and to know how much God truly loves you.

You have been bleesing me with your poetic flow in your last poems expressing such deep revelation from simple things in life.

Thank you and God bless,

Bob <><

[This message has been edited by Lighthousebob (edited 04-13-2001).]

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