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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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I know I can come lay it all out here spread low my wings leave all loose my fear I know I can take a breath put all quivering aside but what if there should be death from which no one can hide Will you give me strength or will I walk great lengths in the dark of day, seeking for the light only wanting of one thing, to set all to right I know I can come lay it all out here spread low my wings leave all loose my fear |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Straight from the heart. Thanks for sharing! A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Pefect! A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Very well put. We all rely on this place, I believe. Betty Lou Hebert |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I know I can come lay it all out here spread low my wings leave all loose my fear What a blessing those lines are.  |
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Stephanos
since 2000-07-31
Posts 3618Statesboro, GA, USA |
This was a very personal poem, and very well done. Just one thing though, should the line- "leave all loose my fear" be read "leave all, loose my fear."? It seemed clearer in meaning with the comma there. But maybe you were meaning something else. Just thought I'd ask. Stephen. |
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