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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2001-02-25 07:00 AM


No sun-rise today
there's only a cloudy sky
as my heart is gray
and my tears flow like raindrops
till Your Son-rise in my soul



A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.




[This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 02-25-2001).]

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deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
1 posted 2001-02-25 07:25 AM


This is a heartwarming piece. It brings to mind the entry in Ann Frank's Diary, who experience the Nazi atrocities. She said, "I believe in God, even when the sun is not shining" or something very similar to that.
The Son-shine in the heart can enlighten & warm one of the darkest coldest days.



David


No Better Place do I know
Than where Hearts knit as
one,
For in that grand
experience,
The Better ALL become.

God Bless us All!!!

BSC
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2 posted 2001-02-25 11:40 AM


Ahhh, and a beautiful "Son"rise it will be Ellie... Bonnie
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
3 posted 2001-02-25 04:14 PM


Lovely, lovely, and that's from where the true Son comes. Today, we have a 2nd glorious sunny day in a row, again with a patch of blue the size of Texas overhead. Small town, shor buildings, levelish land allows for wondrous big sky!

Enjoyed your tanka, tanka very much! sorry, couldn't resist!

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
4 posted 2001-03-01 02:50 PM


Ellie,

Have you heard????????

the good news...................

...the Son is risen!!!!

Hey, it's cloudy here is CA,

but we are heading to Disneyland tomorrow with the kids....

if it rains?

Just means shorter lines!!!!

Every storm has a silver lining.

Bob <><

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2001-03-03 07:34 AM


Ellie, I wish you could see the smile....
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