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littleC
Junior Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 21


0 posted 2000-08-01 08:40 AM


City of Gold

so many stories of you are told
Oh, sweet Jerusalem
City of gold!

To keep you free, men fight by your side
And for your sake
Many have died.

so many soldiers have fallen at your gate
Struggling to save you
From any grim fate.

Fro you Jerusalem, all through the ages
Though greatly outnumbered
Stood soldiers and sages,

Ready to die for your sweet existence
Same as soldiers now
Fighting on with persistence.

So many of us wish, that we could have gave
Our lives in place of
The heroes willing to save

You sweet Jerusalem, in days present and old;
The grandest of places,
Our city of gold.

We can not die for them, but each day
Place a stone on their tombs
And a shema we can say.


littleC

In memorie of all those who have fallen for the sake of Jerusalem.



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Alle'cram
Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
1 posted 2000-08-01 11:52 AM


Hi littleC, with a big heart! Good idea and well written.
Just a little trivia: Isaiah 62:1-4; the new Jerusalem will be called, "Hephzibah" (symbolic name of Jerusalem) and the symbolic name for the land of Caanan or Palestine will be "Beulah".

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FacesinHim
Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 29

2 posted 2000-08-01 03:52 PM


That was just beautiful and so wonderfully said, what a talent you have been given!  Sincerely facesinhim


BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
3 posted 2000-08-02 07:42 AM


littleC,  Such heartfelt words, written beautifully.  Bonnie
juliet_2u
Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
4 posted 2000-08-02 10:06 AM


littleC, this is so lovely and beautifully written. It brought to mind these words.
Ah, City of Gold,
How the prophets have fore told,
You will be His dwelling place.
And there we shall be with Him,
Face to face.

To Him be all the glory and many blessing to you my poetic friend,welcome to Passions. Juls


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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
5 posted 2000-08-03 10:35 PM


This is a great portrayal of the wonderful city Jerusalem! I enjoyed this one alot  
Lighthousebob
Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
6 posted 2000-08-04 02:16 PM


Again, Thank you for sharing your time spent in Jerusalem.  Your experiences there are a fortaste of a "Glorious Time" to come as expressed in Revelation 21.  True, many have suffered and died for that Great City of Gold, but not without notice and reward in the Life to come...  Bob <><

littleC
Junior Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 21

7 posted 2000-08-06 03:02 PM


Thanks, all of you, for your nice comments.  They were all greatly appreciated!  

littleC

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