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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2000-07-04 02:47 AM


It is a misty Summers
rain,
the smell of the earth
pungent and sweet.
The fragrance of the
flowers heightened
and intoxicating.
Somehow dear Lord
my heart knows,
this is
the fragrance of You!


Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

ellie LeJeune


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deleeme
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1 posted 2000-07-04 07:28 AM


Ah Ellie,
Isn't it invigorating the smell of a summer's rain- that just fills the sense as you breath it in- just as the aroma of God Grace and tender mercies with which he seeks to fill our hearts and lives. This is a beautiful observation-a lovely connection.
  Thank you & thank the God of all our senses!    David

BSC
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2 posted 2000-07-04 11:05 AM


Dear Ellie - How beautiful.  Ah, the sweet aromas after a gentle rain.  This just makes me want to go out in the yard and take a deep  breath.  (When it stops raining)!!  Bonnie
Musicmaker1969
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3 posted 2000-07-04 11:36 AM


What a beautiful way to describe the fragrance of the Lord.  It uses all of our senses.  What a most beautiful poem.  I enjoyed it greatly.  Thank you.  Sheri.
ellie LeJeune
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4 posted 2000-07-06 09:56 PM


thank you for the lovely replies that I treasure so much.
Lighthousebob
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5 posted 2000-07-07 01:52 PM


I had to open up my nostrils and breathe this one in... Yes, it has the sweet aroma of God.  Bob <><
Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
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6 posted 2000-07-07 04:28 PM



Ellie, you must know by now how much I love your writing style.  You are a breath of fresh air.  What a beautiful way to look at nature and get lost in the invigorating scent of God's love for us  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly

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