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Allstaria22
Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 83
MN USA

0 posted 2000-06-20 03:57 PM


seventeen
ready to save the world
willing to give my life
when I found I couldn't
pourpose
excitement
and meaning
left my life
all I ever wanted
was to help
to return the gift
that saved my life
but it didn't save me
did it
it kept me alive
only to kill me
first my dreams
then my heart
slowly killing my body
till there is nothing left
why
I gave You my life
my everything
You took my all
but I must remember
nothing
nothing compares to the
tourture You endured for me
my optimisim
helps to clarify
but even someone like me
who loves You
has a hard time
understanding

how do the lost ones cope?



Isaiah 1:18
"Everyone loves a rose, will you be thankful for the thorns?"

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ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-06-20 06:04 PM


It sounds like you're having a difficult time. The only way to cope is to keep clinging to God and He will give you the courage that you need. Beautifully written poem, Allistair, keep writting too. You can use this pain to write and flourish in you gift of poetry. Love, Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

ellie LeJeune


deleeme
Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
2 posted 2000-06-20 08:36 PM


I see a heavy heart, one who would do anything to change the world for the better- but has not yet found that inward peace & patience of soul.  Yet as you have said--your quest is indeed more bearable, by keeping the ultimate sacrifices the Lord has made on our behalf.  May I suggest two passages of scripture for you to read- one which so directs us to focus on Jesus so we will not lose heart, and the other which gives guidance to help us find the peace of God and the God of peace in our lives.  They are:
Hebrews 12:1-4 and Phililppians 4:4-13.
  God bless you,Friend-Keep on keeping on,
                    David
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"GOD GIVES- but man must open his hand." (German Proverb)



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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
3 posted 2000-06-25 11:47 AM


Wow! Sad but powerful! This has said a lot to me. If I'm getting this right, we can't pay back Jesus for what He did for us. He did it out of love. But we can give our lives to Him, and we can help others.
I was always one who wanted to change every broken heart I saw. Those who were starving, and homeless, and it tore me up.

We are each given a gift, whether that may be just smiling at the right person at the right time, or telling someone else. He works through us without us even being aware of it sometimes.

How do the lost cope without Him? Not very well. My sister is one of those lost. If it's not meant to be it won't be. Sometimes it for there own protection.

I liked this very much. I could go on and on here but I will quit now.
God bless you in your journey!

BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
4 posted 2000-06-25 01:44 PM


Allstaria22 - I've been where you are, having a hard time understanding....still do at times, but He is always there, and He will hold you up and give you strength.  And soon enough you'll see a butterfly, a baby bunny, or just feel a gentle breeze, and you'll know, He's there.  Heart wrenching, beautifully written piece. Take care, Bonnie
MySisterMegan
New Member
since 2000-11-10
Posts 8

5 posted 2000-11-10 11:54 PM


we don't cope, that is why we are lost.

'In my eyes I see a blur of things that others see so clearly'

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