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ROSE MARY
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 82
scranton,pa. u.s.a

0 posted 2000-06-15 12:36 PM



THE MAZE

In the middle of my maze
is the Throne of Jesus Christ
waiting for me to reach it
as I journey through my life

From my very first breath
I was placed at the entrance gate
once I developed my own mind
I entered in for I couldn't wait

Traveling across the unknown
having to choose the wrong from right
feeling a presence telling me which way to turn
but self putting up a fight

Each time self won out
a stonewall I would meet at that end
and I'd have to back track all the way
to begin all over again

Each twist and turn held knowledge
a Holy wisdom offered so free
but sometimes I'd close my eyes and ears
and think I knew what was good for me

So aimlessly wondering
I'd find myself lost and all alone
then I'd repent cry out to God
and my next path He would make known

A maze is a puzzle
that takes time and patience to win
many times you'll meet a dead end
and see a new way must be your friend

The Creator of your maze
designed it with purpose and plan
that no man would reach the throne of God
without holding those nail scarred hands

For there is no obstacle to great
that the Lord can't make a way through
when you give your heart and soul to Him
and do all that He asks of you

written by
rose mary(c)6/10/2000
sadie1030@aol.com


 

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Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
1 posted 2000-06-15 01:01 AM


Rose, Awesome!! How much truth in this poem. Not my way but Thy way. Rose, this is so beautiful and heartfelt and hit me right in the face. I loved it. Thanks for this one.
Blessings to you sweet sister,
Marcy

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2000-06-15 06:56 AM


Rose; Your usual profound and inspiring poetry, filled with His love and truth. thank you once again for touching my heart and giving me pause. Love, Ellie

 Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.
ellie LeJeune



Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
3 posted 2000-06-15 02:52 PM


AMAZING... amazing Grace! By God's Grace we will make it through.

Bob <><

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
4 posted 2000-06-15 03:16 PM


This piece had me picturing one of those English Garden mazes...and I was desparately looking for some garden shears!

This is a very nice piece and an enjoyable read.  Thank you.

 Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~


Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
5 posted 2000-06-20 02:48 AM


i have never read any of your work before but this poem here makes me want to read it all. i love it and keep it up.

I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul



Alexander Duke
Junior Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 12

6 posted 2000-06-24 06:36 AM


irresepective of ones beliefs this poem holds a universal truth and its is very
well written. I could fell myself in it.

I will like to read more of your work

deleeme
Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
7 posted 2000-06-24 06:50 AM


Rose Mary.
  You really were inspired with this one! Your imagery of the maze and the many spiritual applications which you so beautifully entwined are nothing short of
a-maze-ing!  A very inspiring piece, Thank you---David

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