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cates
Junior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 15


0 posted 1999-11-27 05:48 PM


pouring in like, the flame
from a burning in hell.
this feels so good, in my every living cell.
the places i go, are like a roaring fire.
this can't be put out, my long summers
drought.
feelings so dry, that I can not cry.

© Copyright 1999 cates - All Rights Reserved
Ohme
Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816
Texas
1 posted 1999-11-27 07:31 PM


But the rain comes and then the draught is over.

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?

cates
Junior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 15

2 posted 1999-11-27 07:35 PM


Thanks Ohme, I surely could use a good down pour!
danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
3 posted 1999-11-28 10:58 AM


I can relate to this rather well. Alot of times I feel I have no tears left to cry after the downpoor over the last four years of my life. But the tears always seem to return, whether I like it or not.
Well done cates.

RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023
United Kingdom
4 posted 1999-11-28 12:33 PM


Cates: I like to think of tears as a way of spring cleaning your heart but then I am mad..

HUGS

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There are two ways of spreading light: to be the candle, or the mirror that reflects it...

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