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Kevin
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0 posted 1999-11-10 04:14 PM


Just how long has it been?
my friend I wish that I could say
my mind has wandered off again
distant from the light of day

insecure with my surroundings
lost among familiar scenes
a place insanity lies bounding
distant from the world serene

no order to the way I feel
books are scattered on the shelf
emotions wrapped up in surreal
worthy of Dali himself

bend over to pick up the pieces
love and life fall to your knees
time once again ceases
a mind never again at ease.

© Copyright 1999 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 1999-11-10 05:43 PM


Oh Geez, I've had days like this...

good piece, Kev.

hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 1999-11-11 09:34 AM


Nice one Kevin
Nan
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3 posted 1999-11-11 08:33 PM


Ditto that......
Denise
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4 posted 1999-11-11 08:51 PM


Very well done, Kevin!

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Denise


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