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Lynn
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since 1999-09-20
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Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

0 posted 1999-11-21 08:22 PM



No Longer A Friend

We once were strangers.

We were introduced by a friend
and we automatically clicked.
Something about you intrigued me,
you were mystierious in a way.

We then became friends.

I trusted you like no other.
You were always there for me,
when no one else was.
We were considered inseperable.

We soon turned into lovers.

Often we found ourselves kissing
while hold each other close.
We would wake up in the morning
and feel that our night had been complete.

I fell in love with you.

My life was centered around you.
You were the only thing on my mind.
I began to look at you differently.
You were no longer my friend, but the
object of my affection.


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If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~

[This message has been edited by Lynn (edited 11-21-1999).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 1999-11-21 08:31 PM


Lynn, how wonderful for you.
When friendship goes full-circle
the love that it encircles
has no end.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-11-21 09:48 PM


What better love than that that starts with a solid base of friendship
ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
Wisconsin
3 posted 1999-11-21 10:31 PM


Oh Lynn, I envy you This is the truest Love in the world, the way I have always believed to be the best way to fall in love. The search is long and hard, but the yield is worth every long second. Beautiful poem my friend.

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Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be

Lynn
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since 1999-09-20
Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.
4 posted 1999-11-21 10:46 PM



Marge & Hoot...This is one friend I hope I never lose. Thanks for responding.

ThUnDeRkYsS...Thanks for the comment. This friend has been there for me through so much. He knows and understands me more than anyone else. It was kinda friendship at first sight, but it turned into us falling for each other. Although we aren't "together" physically, we are "together" at heart.

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If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~

Denise
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5 posted 1999-11-22 12:36 PM


Beautiful, Lynn! I hope you are together forever! (sometimes that happens )

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Denise


Lynn
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since 1999-09-20
Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.
6 posted 1999-11-22 04:53 PM



Thanks Denise. As long as we re friends forever I'll be the happiest girl that ever lived.

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If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~

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