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Master
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since 1999-08-18
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Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-11-20 04:53 PM


I gripped her hand as if it was a cross
She tempted me into her wicked web
And as we sneaked inside upon our toes
The ground shook from every step

Just as the locks await their fitting keys
My stainless heart awaited her embrace
She kissed me once with autumn’s breeze
Then, disappeared without a trace

Came winter... windows froze with ice
And ashen snow fell on the surface
And in my dreams I sought her eyes
Like every key that seeks its purpose

© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Erynn Griffin
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since 1999-11-20
Posts 27
San Angelo, TX United States
1 posted 1999-11-20 05:00 PM


That was a great poem ...@}~~~)~~
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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2 posted 1999-11-20 05:09 PM


Very good, Master. I enjoyed this very much.

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Denise


Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA
3 posted 1999-11-20 05:31 PM


THanks for the Rose Erynn and thank you Denise!


[This message has been edited by Master (edited 11-20-1999).]

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