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My Loving Richard
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My Loving Richard |
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Miss Abagail Mannering Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 136byron, il |
My Loving Richard written 11/16/99 Blooming roses, buds of glory every petal tells a story. Does he love me does he not? He told me once, but i forgot. Petal by petal gloats to the ground, and as they land they make no sound. Last of the petals is about to gall- and as it lands I see it all. He loves me tender, he loves me true... and now I know what I need to do. I'll tell him today that I love him dear- and make sure that the message is clear. My Loving Richard, your love is sweet- you make my life feel so complete. I'll be your friend, I'll be your wife. I'll be true to you for the rest of my life. Dedicated to my loving Richard on our 2 month anniversary.. ------------------ "Some people aren't worth a puddle of ant pee in the middle of a dessert when it's 100 degrees in the shade." -me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Abagail, Your poem is a delight. Welcome |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, this is so sweet and precious! Very well done!  ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very nicely written...I like |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
This is so sweet. I liked it a lot. |
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Miss Abagail Mannering Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 136byron, il |
thank you all.... |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
This is charming Miss Abagail Like this I do....... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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