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mc
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since 1999-11-16
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0 posted 1999-11-16 05:34 PM


My feelings so hard to conceive
for what I know may seem so little
but what I feel
Heaven knows I don't Know.

Have you ever felt like there's no one there to go to and feel free, have you ever wondered where all the love and passion go?
When did you stop feeling? where did you leave all the crazy stuff behind?

When did you stop believing in yourself?
Who or what power came to take your feelings away from you?
Can it be possible not to distinguish your own sorrow?
How can anyone say for sure exactly what they feel?

It's been so long since I was in touch with my inner voice, so trained to ignore my deep own feelings. I wonder what I feel, what I hear, but most of all I'm confussed by the so many deamons inside of me: fear, loneliness, insecurity, that I honestly don't know wheter I act or REACT....

I don't intend anyone to understand,
neither the less to listen
to any of this nonsense,
but if you ever ask not to feel for something, think twice for it might be the best gift you have ever had!!!!

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mcestrada

[This message has been edited by mc (edited 11-16-1999).]

[This message has been edited by mc (edited 11-17-1999).]

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Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 1999-11-16 08:02 PM


Very sad - it's great to just write it all down yes?
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