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Changing - Rearranging
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Changing - Rearranging ~Marge Tindal~ 1999 When we met you shared, with praise, all the things you liked about me. I was just who I was, no one else I wanted to be. Through the years you tried to make me into someone new. Always wanting me to change the very things I knew. One day I looked in the mirror, not sure of who I'd see. I don't believe I know myself. I don't see a resemblance to me. The day you said you were leaving, stunned, I asked you, Why? You said I wasn't the girl you fell in love with ... I had changed ... Oh, my ! Changed? Changed? My whole life you rearranged. Now ... just when I thought I suited you, you've decided to move the furniture again ! ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
this reminds me of a song but i like your sentiment it was beautifully written ------------------ Don't Fall.. Rise in Love -------823------- |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Very nicely expressed.......I can see this looming in the near future for a couple of my friends that are dating...... ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow, can I ever relate to this one |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
wow, me too this is great ! |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
me three... ------------------ Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
me four |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Ah...change, sometimes I love that word, sometimes I hate it but it always seems to be there, doesn't it? The furniture's alway moving around me and I keep tripping in the dark...good poem marge, love the ending. michael |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Can't imagine anybody wanting you to change. Elizabeth |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wonderful - and very insightful. The desire to change another is one of the true enemies in a relationship. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
So many times the things people admire about us are the things they want to change after they have us. I agree, Marge. It's a BUMMER. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
StarFairy2-Thank you. SD-Call the moving van. Hoot-Iloveit-RS-Martie-Sounds like you are all related! Michael-I can see 'tripping over the furniture.' Elizabeth-Thanks, I consider that a personal compliment. I don't have to live it to write it...and maybe it helps someone else. Severn-Relationships should be worked and then re-worked. Takes two to move furniture. Balladeer-Oh, my friend, right ... it's a bummer to set about to change the very things that drew you to a person to begin with. *THANKS TO YOU ALL. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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