A stroke of light upon the snowy canvas...

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Open Poetry #4

A stroke of light upon the snowy canvas...

Master
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since 1999-08-18

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Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-12-24 01:01 AM

A stroke of light upon the snowy canvas,
And morning slowly rises with a yawn.
Inside the room, a smell of burning candles
Is quickly mixed with freshness of the dawn.
Just hours ago, the stars were gazing in
Right through window’s icy, silver mesh,
And warmth was penetrating through the skin,
When spirits met outside their fervent flesh.
Two lips were locked in an eternal kiss.
Their hungry eyes just seemed to bond them.
The ceiling shook from moans of bliss,
As ancient clay snowed down upon them.
And now this house, like a gallery of art,
Preserves that night, contains my heart.

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I fell in love and kept on falling

[This message has been edited by Master (edited 12-24-1999).]

Denise

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1 posted 1999-12-24 01:09 PM

Beautiful, Master! What a lovely picture you have painted!

Denise

Master
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since 1999-08-18

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Boston, MA

2 posted 1999-12-24 03:47 PM

Thank you Denise!

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

3 posted 1999-12-24 04:15 PM

This is such a beautiful piece Master...

and have a Very Merry Christmas and Joyous New Year....

A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon

Master
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Boston, MA

4 posted 1999-12-24 09:03 PM

Thank you Pepper and I wish the same to you! Happy HOlidays!

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 1999-12-24 10:01 PM

Master -
Such a lovely work to see on Christmas Eve.
May yours be merry.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Master
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since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

6 posted 1999-12-25 01:00 PM

Thank you Marge, I wish Happy Holidays also!

Elizabeth

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7 posted 1999-12-25 01:03 PM

What a lovely poem-and it really is a nice picture too!

Nail to the mast her holy flag,
Set every threadbare sail-
And give her to the god of storms,
The lightning and the gale!
-Oliver Wendell Holmes

Master
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since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

8 posted 1999-12-25 01:34 PM

Thank you Elizabeth, glad you enjoyed it!

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